the romance of it all...!! i love this brand of older but not necessarily wiser canon used-to-date jrzy and i will never be tired of it... ellie u could write 500 of this version of jrzy and i would read every single one TT___TT
so many good scenes and THE TENSION BETWEEN THEM!! why is Jay Are Junior Jinyoung such a flirt here, who told him that was ok!! i love the banter - "Don't you dare put me on a pedestal," Suzy warned. "I'm sick of men treating me like some kind of prize they want to win. It's like you're all threatened by success." / "Mm. And fame, and beauty…" Jinyoung said, tilting his head to one side, half-mocking her, half-amused. and "What did you come here to say to me?" she asks primly, arching an eyebrow. / This time he does smirk, resting his elbow on the back of the sofa and resting his head on his hand. "I came to say I'm sorry, of course."... such a delicious back and forth and THAT ENDING! chemistry off the charts ♡ also i love the visual of them in suzy's car in the rain and acting like nothing happened after... when you're not over and never going to be over your ex you dated when you were teenagers... sometimes it's valid!! also i love the way u took the pride/ego parts and overarching desire of the prompts into this... u are truly a writing genius ellie ♡
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so many good scenes and THE TENSION BETWEEN THEM!! why is Jay Are Junior Jinyoung such a flirt here, who told him that was ok!! i love the banter - "Don't you dare put me on a pedestal," Suzy warned. "I'm sick of men treating me like some kind of prize they want to win. It's like you're all threatened by success." / "Mm. And fame, and beauty…" Jinyoung said, tilting his head to one side, half-mocking her, half-amused. and "What did you come here to say to me?" she asks primly, arching an eyebrow. / This time he does smirk, resting his elbow on the back of the sofa and resting his head on his hand. "I came to say I'm sorry, of course."... such a delicious back and forth and THAT ENDING! chemistry off the charts ♡ also i love the visual of them in suzy's car in the rain and acting like nothing happened after... when you're not over and never going to be over your ex you dated when you were teenagers... sometimes it's valid!! also i love the way u took the pride/ego parts and overarching desire of the prompts into this... u are truly a writing genius ellie ♡